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Subject: project deadline reminder

hello,

Just a reminder that the budget report still needs to be finalized. Marketing data was shared by Raj last Friday, so those figures must be included. Kindly review the draft and send me your feedback.

Also, I noticed some discrepancies in the data from the finance team. Can you please cross-check those numbers before finalizing?

Additionally, we may need to adjust the report format slightly to match the manager's preferences. Please check the previous reports for reference.

Let me know if you face any issues. The final report is due next Monday.

thanks,

Sarah

Manager, Sales Team

ABC Corporation

Answer:

Subject: Project Deadline Reminder

Hello,

This is a reminder that the budget report still needs to be finalized. The marketing data shared by Raj last Friday must be included, so please ensure those figures are incorporated. Kindly review the draft and share your feedback.

I also noticed some discrepancies in the finance team's data. Could you please cross-check those numbers before finalizing the report?

Additionally, we may need to slightly adjust the report format to align with the manager's preferences. Please refer to previous reports for guidance.

Let me know if you encounter any issues. The final report is due next Monday.

Thanks,
Sarah
Manager, Sales Team
ABC Corporation